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PostPosted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 10:35 pm    Post subject: My random idiotic writings.. Reply with quote

What the..?


‘Ahh, good, you came.’ I said as my girlfriend, a pretty girl named Sara Carr, got in my car. It actually wasn’t my car, I’d asked a friend to park it here. Specifically, for this date. And ‘here’ was actually the school parking lot.

‘Hia, Tyler. Why wouldn’t I come?’

‘I’ve had dates.. well.. let’s just say they didn’t happen. At all.’

‘Ahh..’ she said understandingly.

‘Yup.’

‘So.. let’s get this started.’

She merely nodded. We were starting to kiss when we heard a loud noise, followed by swearing. Voice sounded male.

‘What the..?’ I asked quietly.

‘Just ignore it, we can look later.’

‘No, I don’t think so, they’re probably hear to steal something.’

‘And..?’ She asked, sounding annoyed.

‘We could get something for stopping it?’

‘Yeah..’ She started smirking. ‘Let’s go.’ She said, buttoning her shirt and getting out of the car.

"Hey, umm.. Wait for me.' I whispered to her back, three feet away already.

I stuck my feet into my shoes, deciding not to tie them.

'Got a plan?' I asked her while I stuck my arm in my jacket.

'Not yet.' She replied, watching them. A small group of guys in a pickup. Trying to steal an old refrigerator sitting outside.

'What the hell are they doing?' I asked her.

'Trying to take a fridge, it seems. Seems like a waste of time, but hey, I'm not them.'

'True. But WHY would they want it? It's an old fridge supposed to be hauled away tomorrow.'

'Quiet.'

I fell silent, watching both her thinking and them trying to open the fridge, which was on it's side, the door facing downward. She dipped her head forward, letting her long hair cover her face. I suddenly realized just how good looking she was.

'I suggest we leave here and call the cops. Like right now.' I suggested quietly, suppressing the shudder that I suddenly felt.

'No. Not yet.'

'Why?'

'You have a camera?' She asked, ignoring my question.

'I think so, in the trunk.'

'Damnit.'

I simply stared at her. This was the first time I'd seen her swear, in the three years I'd known her.

'Opening the trunk will make too much noise, they'd hear us.'

'Right.' I said.

'How far can you throw?'

'Depends. How far do you need and what am I going to throw?'

'Over to, say, that tree over there.' She said, pointing at a tree about twenty feet away.

'Oh, easily. With a rock.'

'Do it, now.'

'What are you going to do?'

'Scare them off.'

'With rocks?' I asked, skeptically.

'No. I'll run up at them and make as much noise as possible.'

'Where does throwing a rock at that tree fit it?' I asked.

'They look over there, I run over behind their truck, and make a lot of noise.'

'If anyone's gonna go into danger, it's me.'

'Why?' she asked.

'I'm the man, I'm supposed to be the one to risk his life.'

'You're not that kind of person, I know you.'

'Yes I am.'

She started to respond, but I grabbed a rock, threw it at the tree she had specified, and ran towards their truck.

I waited a minute for them to let their guard down.

'YAARHG YOU TERRORIST SCUM!' I yelled, trying to scare them off.

A second later I was looking down the barrel of an Ingram Mac 10.

'Oh shit.'

'Oh shit is right, you stupid kid.' One of them said, with a Russian accent.

'I'm not alone, you know. Shoot me and my girlfriend will call the cops and get you killed so many ways to Sunday it isn't funny.'

'You're lying, kid.

'Nope. Not here, not now, commie.' I had a feeling I was pushing my luck by calling him a commie, but what the hell. 'What the hell do you want here, anyways?'

'Should we tell 'im?' one of them asked the guy who seemed to be the leader.

'No. There are a LOT of books ending with people getting rescued in the nick of time.'

They had opened the fridge by now and were checking the inside.

'Ahh, here they are.'

'They?'

'Never you mind, kid.' The Russian said, waving his Mac10 in the air.

At that moment, the world seemed to explode with lights.

A second earlier, the Russian yelled 'He wasn't lying, shit!' and tried to kill me, spraying bullets all over he side of the truck, which I'd been leaning up against. Three bullets got me, one in the thigh, one a little above it, hitting my hip, and another just grazing my left, about half a foot below my shoulder. Those were the last three in the clip. Sara was smart enough to know not to immediately dash out.

I faded out for a second, not being able to do anything more than moan in extreme pain. A couple seconds later, the pain diminished. Not a huge amount, but enough to let me think.

They got into the truck and drove away as fast as the they could, taking two minutes at the most, from when the first of the bullets entered my body to when the truck was merely a pair of red lights in the distance.

'TYLER!' Sara yelled, running over as soon as the truck was out of the parking lot, and crouching over me.

'I.. told.. you..' Was all I had time to gasp before I faded out entirely.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 5:51 am  Reply with quote

I woke in a hospital.

'Tyler!' was the first thing I heard when I opened my eyes. 'How're you feeling?'

'I've been better. How long have I been here?'

'Three days.' Sara replied.

'Water?' I asked, looking around. I noticed my parents, sitting in chairs opposite Sara.

'Right here.' She replied, grabbing a bottle from beside her chair and handing me it.

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 2:28 pm  Reply with quote

i just read through it, and i liked it, a lot.
i'd love to read some more of this when its up.
keep up the good story Wink

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PostPosted: Fri Dec 30, 2005 4:02 pm  Reply with quote

Thanks.
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 2:15 am  Reply with quote

I left the hospital two days later.

'Hey, Tyler, where've you been?' My science teacher asked me as I walked past his door the next day of school.

'Umm.. The hospital?' I replied, wondering whether he'd been living under a rock the last week.

'Ahh, right. I read something in the paper.'

'Yeah, umm.. I'm uhh.. late for math..' I said, starting to run down the hall to my locker.

Three hours later, recess. Actually, more like five minutes outside. I usually avoid the basketball/misc sports court and crouch against a wall, looking out at the woods. I notice a slight movement along the side of a large oak tree.

I look at it.

A ray of sunlight is glinting off of something.

Can't be a.. oh shit.

Binoculars.

I move, not too fast, not slowly, but I move to find Sara.

The bell rings. I look for her in the crowd.

Ah, there, over by the door. I move quickly to her and tap her on the shoulder.

She looks around.

'Oh, hi Tyler.' she says.

'Guy in the woods. Thought you might want to know.' I told her.

'Umm.. Ok.. Why?'

'I think we fucked with a terrorist operation, and they might want revenge. I'd suggest you avoid sitting by a window.' I replied.

'Uhh.. sure, Tyler..' She said. Her tone made me think she'd forget it in a minute, but.. still.. You never know..

We got to her locker as she said that.

'See ya, Sara.' I said, walking past her locker to mine, down on the far side of the hall.

'See ya, Tyler.' She replied, opening her locker.

At the end of school, I usually rode a bus home and sat in my seat alone, with a book or my radio/CD player.. The CD player part seems to have died, though..

Today, however, Sara came on my bus to go over to my house. I didn't complain, as the only problem would be I'd have to stop looking at the girls sitting across from me.

'I thought you walked home' I said when she got on the bus.

'Usually, yeah.. But I felt like coming over to your house.' She replied, grinning.

'Just randomly decided that, did ya?' I asked, grinning.

'Well, yeah.. besides.. you know..' I did. I'd been thinking of it alot.

'Yup. Some 'fun' at my house. Awesome.' I said, smirking.

Half an hour later:'I don't think mom'll be happy, though.'

'Oh well, her problem.' she replied, although not grinning as she had when she had gotten on the bus.

'Yeah.. I just hope she's not home yet, though..'

'Oh well.. We'll do something when we get there.'

'Which is about in a minute, this is my stop.'

'This could be bad.' she replied.

'It could, yeah.' I agreed. 'Oh shit.' We had gotten off the bus.

'What?' she asked.

'Mom. She decided to pick me up.' I replied, feeling slightly sick.

I walked over to the family car, a dark silver Chevy Monte Carlo.

'Hey, mom.' I said, opening the door.

'Hi, dear. And who's your friend?' she asked.

I introduced my mom to Sara, who introduced herself.

We all got in and mom drove us home.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 8:22 am  Reply with quote

wow, like, there in the middle of a war or something ? Razz
somewhat they are into something they should not be in. Smile trouble.
anyway, sounds nice again.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2006 8:07 pm  Reply with quote

Nah, just regular America..

It does have a few more terrorists, tho..

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2006 1:42 am  Reply with quote

(sorry for the delay, couldn't think of ideas for a while)

That night, she stayed over at my house.

We lived in a comfortable house, but no guest room.

So, she had to sleep in my bed. Not that either of us were complaining.

I waited until I was sure my parents were asleep, pinched her ass.

'You awake?' I whispered, hoping to hell she was.

'Yeah..'

'Oh good..'

An hour later, when both of us were.. finished..

'I've got something to tell you..' I said.

'You're dating my sister?' She asked.

'No, not at all.. That was the first time I've slept with someone..'

'So you were a virgin this morning?' she asked, her slight smirk barely visible in the light coming out from under the door..

'Well.. yeah.. but you were too..'

'I'm suprised.. the way you act you'd think you've slept with every girl in the school.. and, yeah, I was.. but I don't act like I've slept with every guy in the school..'

'Haha..'

She starts laughing too.

We go to sleep.

Back up at six AM.

She follows me from my room to the bathroom, and I start the shower, doing my usual morning routine.. She's used to a much different one, where she gets up at six thirty, eats, dresses, and gets driven to the bus stop.

'There's not enough hot water for two showers in the morning before school, you know..'

'Shit.' I stop and stare at her.

'Uhhh.. Can you finish washing your hair and get out so I can.. get in?' She asks, taking off her shirt and starting to take her pants off.

'Oh, sure..' I finish washing my hair and get out, letting the hot water run.

She gets in, and I get dressed and head downstairs.

I hear the water stop running a minute later. I duck my head slightly and keep eating.

I suddenly remember that she doesn't have any clean clothes, and run upstairs, grabbing a pair of my jeans and a shirt.

She gets dressed and we walk to the bus stop. We wait a minute, then the bus gets there. I walk to my seat and she walks right behind me, sitting beside me.

A moron a couple sections lower than us asks Sara, who was looking rather tired, 'Tired, babe?'

I lean forward and look at him, expecting something to happen. She leans over and slaps him really hard.

'Owned!' I said to him, laughing my ass off.

He rubs his face, looks at her, then asks 'Are you wearing boys clothes?'

She looks down at herself, looks at him, then slaps him again, much harder than before.

'ok..' he says, cowering slightly.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2006 1:57 am  Reply with quote

Nice Kyler very nice
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lol.. Thanks, Vincent.
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The bus mostly quieted down after that.

We went to school normally, and had first, second, and third period normally.

Fourth, however, we'd had homework, and neither of us had done it..

The teacher started really annoying her, asking her why she didn't do it.

She replied 'I was over at my boyfriend's house.'

One of the girls that I think is hot, but I don't like, asked her, loudly, 'You have a boyfriend?! Who!?'

At this, I looked at my desk and shook my head, expecting to have everyone looking at me, as well as some 'Congrats, Tyler, you got laid!' and wolf whistling..

'That's none of your damned business.' she replied.

At this, the girl said 'You said a cuss word!' and looked offended.

'As if you haven't heard them, Kate..' I said, the sarcasm obvious to most. 'And said them..'

At this, she jumped out of her seat and ran at me, ultimatly trying for the goal of me curled up in a ball, crying really hard and with half of the bones in my arms broken.

I just looked at her for a second, not believing what she was trying to do, then I immediatly grabbed for the most solid thing I could: my desk.

She grabbed the front of my jacket and tried to pull me from it, I just held onto my desk and waited for someone to do something..

Nobody did, so I realized I had to do SOMETHING. I let go of desk and let her do what she wanted.. for ten seconds.

The moment she tried to throw me on the ground, I knew that if I hit the ground directly, I would not be getting up soon. I grabbed onto her pants and slid between her legs, got up, and started sprinting towards the door. A couple of her friends got there before I did, but they weren't blocking the top of the door. I jumped onto the desk inbetween the door and me, and jumped over them.

I made it into the hall, stopped, and turned around, looking top see if I needed to keep running. I didn't.

And suddenly, I wondered just how the fuck I managed to do that.

I leaned up against the locker behind me, panting and wondering wtf, imagining that everyone else was too.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 3:38 pm  Reply with quote

hmm, there getting real close now arent they Razz
really good how you make another part to it, while the first part was already finished, and could have been the end of the story.
though, always good to see some activity in this part of the forum. Smile
especialy when it is of such quality. Shifty

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2006 10:09 pm  Reply with quote

Well, thanks..

If you've read Tom Clancy's 'Patriot Games', it'll be vaguely like that..

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I waited a minute, noticing that nobody was coming towards me, moved my legs together, and bowed, smirking.

A minute later, most of the class was clapping, whistling, congratulating me, and asking themselves wtf.

Kate was sent to the office, and class mostly continued.

After fourth period, we had 'specials', classes like gym, music, and computer ed.. specials classes were an assortment of students from different sections, so I had a couple people from my section, and most of the rest was from different sections. Some higher, some lower, but all 8th graders.

Sara was in my specials classes, and we had music this month. We sat in a back table together. Alone, a fact I made quite clear when someone tried to sit down there.

Me, being the paranoid bastard I am, looked out the window every other minute..

I didn't see anyone outside, nor was there anyone to see.

Or so I thought.

Next period started as usual, lunch. We ate lunch at the same table, then snuck off to.. make out.. behind the lunchroom.

That's when we heard the gunfire, followed by screams and more gunfire.

'This is really really bad.' I said.

'I noticed..' she replied.

'We have to get away from here.'

I grabbed her hand and started pulling her towards the other side of the school, there was a police station within half a mile.

Someone must have seen us sneaking out, a couple terrorists with automatic rifles burst out of the door we had gone out and started hunting around where we'd been, looking around, probably for us.

One of them started randomly shooting the dumpsters & shit.

One of them richotched a foot over Sara's head, she screamed.

They heard her and started running towards us.

'SHIT!' I yelled. 'RUN, Sara, run!'

I started running, then ran back to her, grabbed her hand, and started running as fast as I could.

They started shooting at us, they must have been new to AK47s, they just pulled and held the trigger, the first shot was the closest, missing by several feet.

They started running towards us, probably to shoot us at close range.

I stopped, hoping to hold them off for at least a minute and give her time to escape.

'Go!' I yelled.

I looked around on the ground for anything that might be used as a weapon.

Steel pole.. no.. tin pie plate.. uhh.. no.. nasty looking steel rod.. That might work..

I picked it up and turned to look at Sara. She was still there, doing nothing.

'GO! RUN! I'll hold them off!' I yelled.

She looked at me for thirty seconds.

'Thank you.'

She turned and sprinted as fast as she could towards the police station.

I turned around looked at the terrorists.

Both of them were armed with automatic weapons.

I did not expect to survive this.

I ran at them, waited until I was within half a foot of one, and swung at one.

I hit him in the chest and he dropped his AK47. The other sprayed at me, the first bullet catching me in the left side of the rib cage, about an inch in.

I grabbed at the first guy's AK and shot at the second terrorist, hitting him in the shoulder. I wacked both with the rifle to make sure they went down and stayed down.

I waited a minute, leaning on the rifle, trying to stay upright and standing.

I collapsed on the ground next to the terrorists, seeing police officers, medics, and all sorts of emergency response personnel.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 09, 2006 7:20 am  Reply with quote

that school is a target of terrorism a lot aint it ?
just as funny, he always has to play the hero, and get shot. Razz
good job, again.

and no, i havent read Tom clancy's 'Petriot Games'

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