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PostPosted: Fri May 16, 2003 6:45 am    Post subject: Poetry Reply with quote

well i'm bored so gonna type up a poem or two.. tell me what you think.

One you never seen
You never met me,
All you know are my words,
Yet you seem confident you know me.
Could this be what yoo are looking for?
Able to give yourself to one you've never seen.
Do these words sooth your soul?
Touching a part of you
These words i say come from the heart
As I am victim to the same experiance
Able to give myself
To one I've never seen.

(dedicated to Stephanie)


Truth of me
You thought Iwas strange
Never once did I cringe
or act as if i was hurt
You thought I knew no pain
Dealing with everything around me
With a grin and a laugh
Wondering if i fealt pain
Or if i was oblivious to it all
Then on that fatefull night
You saw me break down and cry
Wondering if it was me or not
The suddenly you realize
That it all makes sense
Even in my darkest hour
I still grin and laugh
Realizing my softer side
You finally seewh t i truly am
I am everything you dreamed of
Yet you still ponder one thing
"Is it to good to be true?"
Look into my eyes and you will know the truth.

(dedicated to christy)

Deadly Emotions
All these emotions
That I hide
Unable to shoe
The feelings inside
Why cant i show them
Why must i hide them
Filling me up
With all the suffering
I must let loose
Destroy my pain
Only a cut
Will relieve my pain
Just one cut
but not to deep
only enough so i can bleed
As I bleed
My pain dissapears
As I heal
Scars appear
Showing the world
The feelings I hide.

(dedicated to me)

I have many more, and i may post more if you like my works Wink

EDIT: i hate typos, and this crummy keyboard Neutral

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PostPosted: Fri May 16, 2003 12:46 pm  Reply with quote

nice, you sound like a modern poet i read... can't remember his name though...
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PostPosted: Fri May 16, 2003 6:43 pm  Reply with quote

Rattuskid wrote:
nice, you sound like a modern poet i read... can't remember his name though...


Jesus? Eh, Nice poems. Like 'em. Better than mine:

I like pie.
I like to lie.
Pie.

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PostPosted: Fri May 16, 2003 7:06 pm  Reply with quote

maybe tomorrow i will post a few more of them Wink
to lazy and tired to post more now Sleeping

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PostPosted: Fri May 16, 2003 8:50 pm  Reply with quote

cool poem, do post more
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 30, 2003 9:14 am  Reply with quote

old topic.. oh well, i decided to post some more andsince there is a forum for it, theres no need not to now Grin

No on knows
All these feelings I hide
Just to prove I am strong
Locked up inside
So no one knows my pain
Emotionless to the world
No one knows
Why I act as I do
With all these problems
surronding me
People wonder how I stay strong
If they only knew
All the pain I go through
Then they would know
I am like the others
Easy to hurt with a few bad words
But I hide it well
SO no one knows my suffering
Someday I'll break
All the emotins pouring out
Then they'll know, I am weak
Till then I'll continue
Locking up my emotions
So no one knows my pain.


you'll notice alot of my poems are based on depression and love, both of wich i have dealt with alot in my life, most of my poems do come from the heart at the time they were wrote.

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2003 3:27 am  Reply with quote

Dream
Ever had a dream so real
you couldnt tell if it was a dream or nor
Ever woke with a pillow full of tears
The emotions flowing as if it actually happened
The dream so joyus
The feelings so right
That when you wake
All you can do is cry
Tears of pain
because it was only a dream..


I worte that yesterday morning shortly after i woke up, this happened to me that morning... Sad

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PostPosted: Fri Oct 03, 2003 5:38 am  Reply with quote

So poetic
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 04, 2003 7:37 pm  Reply with quote

Thats really good. (Jimbob)
So, depressing tho. But still so lovely.

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 06, 2003 2:18 pm  Reply with quote

as i look through my poenms.. almost everyone is depressing.. guess thats the life i lead..

i may post more later on.. that is if peoplr want to hear more from this depressed person.. lol

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 13, 2004 2:43 pm  Reply with quote

Well I went through a bunch of old books of writing that i had and came up with a few poems that have been collecting dust for about 4 years (I had forgot about them) They seem pretty good, and while reading them, It reminded me fully of what they are about, every detail, as if a wondow into the past.. well here goes

Maze OF Confusion
I am lost in the darkness of my mind
So many paths to choose
So many unkowing ends
How will i make it through this maze of confusion
My heart will navigate me through the dark
Following all my hopes and dreams
There is a light at the end of the path
The light is you
My heart showed me the way to you
I will follow you to the end
So once again I can be free


Truth of Me
You thought I was strange
Never once did I cringe
or act as if i was hurt
You thought i knew no pain
Dealing with everything around me
With a grin and a laugh
Wondering if i felt pain
or if i was oblivious to it all
Then on that fatefull night
You saw me break down and cry
WOndering if it was me or not
Then suddenly you realize
That it all makes sense
Even in my darkest hour
I still grin and laugh
Realizing my softer side
You finally see who I am
I am everything you dreamed of
Yet you still ponder one thing
Is it too good tobe true?
Look in my eyes and you will know the truth.

{dedictaed to Christy)

Clear
You opened my eyes and heart
I see know what i couldnt before
My sight was blurred
Now i see clearly
I see what others cant
My heart ws broke
but now its fixed
And it beats stronger
The feelings i have for another
Are possible because of you
Thank you for what you did
I can see clearly now

(dedicated to Eileen)

I dont think these ones are all that great.. but decided to get other opinions as these three have never been seen by anyone else than me.

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2004 5:59 am  Reply with quote

Some nice poems there JB Smile . Interesting your idea about bottling up emotions - maybe it's just me but I find it quite easy to keep them locked up.
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2004 10:58 am  Reply with quote

Dam good stuff. Wink
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 14, 2004 2:23 pm  Reply with quote

*blush*

Thanks guys Grin

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*couhg* boo *cough
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